When new towns are planned, it is more important to include public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
When planning a new town, the authorities need to take various perspectives into consideration and prioritize constructing particular facilities. While some prefer erecting public parks and gyms, others emphasize developing shopping malls. I totally agree with the former, more than recreational zones, parks and other sports facilities also play an important role in promoting public health and environmental protection.
First and foremost, public parks are good places for doing workouts and entertaining. To be more specific, while young people prefer doing street sports, the elderly could spend hours walking or practicing Tai Chi beneath the shadow of the trees. In the long term, doing workouts regularly not only improves the city dweller’s life quality but also reduce the government’s budget for medical expenses. Besides, picnic areas in parks are ideal places for people to gather as well as entertain, and therefore, they could strengthen the connections as well as make new friends.
Another major benefit that should be mentioned is the role of public parks in protecting the environment. To be more specific, the greenery areas are considered as “green lungs” which absorb pollutants and create a fresh atmosphere for the citizens. That is significant, especially in cities with various constructions as well as an enormous amount of transport vehicles which release tons of gases per year. The exhaust gases not only contribute to respiratory diseases but also enhance ozone depletion and climate changes.
In conclusion, when considering the positive influences of parks and sports facilities on preventing the sedentary life as well as limiting environmental pollution, I concur that developing these constructions rather than shopping centers should be prioritized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68888888889 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02117810577 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.38599882 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27633358033 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880860725426 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575067200076 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156887197178 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685850948388 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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