The continue rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of the continued rise?
Do you agree that is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
At present, overpopulation is one of the biggest problem of the world. The ongoing growing in the world's population is the enormous problem faced by humanity nowadays. In my view, I am convinced that, growth in population is greatest problem due to several causes.
One of the main reason is that, poverty is believed to be leading reason of the overpopulation. In huge part of the world there are plenty of people are uneducated. Therefore, they are unknown about high death rates and higher birth rates. As a result countries with huge number of poor people is also likely to be the biggest contributors to population growth. For example, UN has predicted that forty-eight poorest countries in the world is becoming the contributors of the population growth. Another reason is that, development in the field of medical plays an important role in the increasing population. Because of it humans are likely to live more then humans lives in the past.
However, I agree that rise of world's population is probably one of the biggest threats to mankind due to some causes. Firstly, overpopulation is the reason of overconsumption, which result in resources depletion and environment degradation. As per research of scientists important resources for living life is reducing nowadays. Secondly, unemployment is also seen in densely populated areas. Therefore, so many people are unemployed in twenty-first century. Finally, in some countries there are no rules to control the population growth, if government makes rules about it then this problem would be solved. For instance, recently china government made rules that every parent have no more then two children to reduce the population rate.
To recapitulation, it could not be denied that one of the biggest problem face by mankind at present is overpopulation. I think that, it can be handle by following certain rules and by learning to live with it .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...f the world. The ongoing growing in the worlds population is the enormous problem face...
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the greatest'.
Suggestion: is the greatest
...am convinced that, growth in population is greatest problem due to several causes. One ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...igh death rates and higher birth rates. As a result countries with huge number of ...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tant role in the increasing population. Because of it humans are likely to live more th...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...se of it humans are likely to live more then humans lives in the past. However, ...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...de rules that every parent have no more then two children to reduce the population r...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...in rules and by learning to live with it .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15112540193 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04723255311 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520900321543 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3187983768 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.3157894737 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22218763072 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686918904758 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851379232891 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159512097063 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114596180952 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.