In recent years, plastic surgery has become increasingly popular in account of its’ ability to increase one’s beauty. While a number of facts contributed to this development, it is indeed a positive trend as this essay will demonstrate.
By nature, women are more concern about their appearance than men; they therefore seek plastic surgical care more often. Belly fat, for instance, bothers women especially in their middle age, making it the leading complaint that cosmetic surgeons encounter. In addition to that, every one concerns about their facial appearance, notably the celebrities. Therefore, people get cosmetic therapies for multiple facial deformities; that is why frequently surgeries are performed to remove scars, to get rid of double chin, to reshape nose and to reduce cheek fat. Other than enhancing the beauty, some prefer to undergo Oro-maxillary-facial operations in order to regain the appearance they had before accidents especially, road traffic accidents and burn injuries. Not only can they have their previous personality, but it enables them to get rid of deformities and give them a chance to make things better for themselves and their community.
That being said, plastic surgeries offer multiple benefits to beauty oriented people. Making things better is that women’s physical beauty plays a vital role in maintaining relationships. Hence, this enables relationships to be strong, especially the romantic relationships. However, some may argue that side effects of cosmetic operations are much higher, and should therefore be discouraged. But, I personally do not agree with that because this specialty has grown dramatically for last few years, which now the modern technology is being used and adverse effects thereby are almost eliminated. The primary benefit of this technology is that it cures deformities and gives confidence to individuals to go to the society and to have a better life. This is supported by a recent study conducted at Colombo University, in which they claim that those who escaped deformities by surgeries do not suffer from depression, in contrast to people who continue to live with the disability.
In conclusion, cosmetic manipulations gift a number of advantages to both individuals and to the society as a whole and should therefore be encouraged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'its'?
Suggestion: its
...come increasingly popular in account of its’ ability to increase one’s beauty. While...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45706371191 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04438056196 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590027700831 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1763471714 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.125 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199527326604 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051277427653 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321714019785 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967544144298 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327858617791 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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