The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words

The line graph provides information about the number of travellers at underground train station in London represented with 24 hours scale.

Overall, the train station was bustling with people during office hours whilst less crowded when, in afternoons. In contrast, passengers to train station had fluctuations throughout the day.

With crack of dawn, people begun gathering, nearly hundred of them stood in base area of station. It doubled in consecutive hour. Drastic change took place as it was deafening with around 400 number of people at 8AM in the morning. Figures fell about 220 as office hours passed away. In comparison with, At 10 am, it begin to rose again with minimal of 20 passengers to get on train, from 11 to 12, there were 300 travellers on train station which steeped for upcoming two hours.

On the 24 hours scale, hour 14th onwards people commenced to leave station with 70 and 250 people in 15th and 16th hour respectively. Similar to the morning when 100 were there, Although it was only time of day which faced least crowd. In contrast, it started rising again and peaked same amount as office hours in 18th hour of day. While, it fell sharply for next hour and reached at 300 and huge fall of 325 passengers in evening. But, in night time, few people(25) can be noticed on board.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...of dawn, people begun gathering, nearly hundred of them stood in base area of station. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...out 220 as office hours passed away. In comparison with, At 10 am, it begin to rose again ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'begins'?
Suggestion: begins
... away. In comparison with, At 10 am, it begin to rose again with minimal of 20 passen...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'faced the least'.
Suggestion: faced the least
... Although it was only time of day which faced least crowd. In contrast, it started rising a...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78414096916 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44102954512 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.438864662 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5384615385 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120704358883 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456111065996 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055671485954 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100782644652 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661046531488 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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