Using cars has been becoming increasingly common in recent years. Although I
think that it maintains some obvious harmful consequences, I strongly believe that
the advantages of the car can outweigh its advantages.
On the one hand, owning cars has a significant influence on the environment. The
first reason is that the growth in travelling by car can lead to a rise in pollution,
traffic jams, and accidents. More cars are likely to result in rocketing rate of
pollution. Secondly, our dependence on cars can lead to decrease in practices,
such as walking and cycling. People may have a higher chance of carrying more
potential health risks like obesity and heart attack.
On the other hand, there are many reasons why people prefer to own cars. Firstly,
it provides people with the freedom of movement. The ease of transportation
which a car brings is significant/prominent than any other form of vehicles. For
example, you can go from a destination to another destination and no time is
wasted waiting for the bus or train. Therefore, time and distance are not barriers
anymore. Secondly, personal cars can give comfort while travelling compared to
the public transports which are so crowded and disgusting. For instance, you can
read books, listen to your favourite songs or even play with kids while you are in
your own car but all seems to be impossible on a public transport. Finally,
families can go together. This becomes especially helpful when there are elderly,
the disabled or even sick members in the families.
In conclusion, having a car can lead to a few obvious problems, but I believe that
owning a car is the best choice and the benefits that it brings about can outshine its
drawbacks.
- Do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages 61
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- Do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 18, column 48, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'public transport'.
Suggestion: public transport
...n car but all seems to be impossible on a public transport. Finally, families can go together. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0553633218 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91831538671 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7302715103 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193041492242 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05447621231 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497268233352 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548168509777 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621740119624 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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