You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mr. Jones,
I am your new neighbour moved recently into Villa 36. I am writing this letter to inform you about house warming party i am planning to arrange next saturday.
I am new to Australia and moved last fortninght here with my wife and two school going kids. I am working for an insurance company and my wife is currently setting up the home and finding job. Meanwhile, we are also planning to have a house warming party for our new home. I do have some old friends and colleauges invited for the party next Saturday. Since, i will be meeting with some of the friends after a while, it is possible that party may get extened late in the night. I am afraid that you have hear some noise and disturbances, however, will try to wrap up everything by midnight. I sincerely apologize in advance for any inconvenience it may cause to you.
Alternatively, i was wondering whether its possible for you & your family join the party as well. We will be happy to meet you and wife and children will get acquainted as well. Please let me know what's your thought about this and do send me your food preferances, if any.
Looking forward to see you in party.
With Regards,
Shailabh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to inform you about house warming party i am planning to arrange next saturday. ...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...with my wife and two school going kids. I am working for an insurance company and...
^
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ted for the party next Saturday. Since, i will be meeting with some of the friend...
^
Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...Saturday. Since, i will be meeting with some of the friends after a while, it is possible t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'heard'.
Suggestion: heard
...in the night. I am afraid that you have hear some noise and disturbances, however, w...
^^^^
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ce it may cause to you. Alternatively, i was wondering whether its possible for ...
^
Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... acquainted as well. Please let me know whats your thought about this and do send me ...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...preferances, if any. Looking forward to see you in party. With Regards, Shailab...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50925925926 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54604854325 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4560667785 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5714285714 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34381152371 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102057505895 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742021603004 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192084888651 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927713279468 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.