do you agree or disagree with the following statement
sports should have equal financial support as academic courses and libraries in universities and colleges
Currently, the gym has been considered as an integrate part of a university. In this case, there is a controversial issue that whether schools should invest as same money on academic classes and libraries as gyms. While some people agree with this statement that sports should have equal financial support as academic classes. On the other point, some people believe academic classes and libraries are the most important things for a university, so schools should invest majority of money in these. Personally, the later point, I believe, is more reasonable.
First of all, it is investing majority of money on academic classes and libraries that improve rankings of universities. For example, the QS ranking system usually ranks all of universities in the world every year. One of the leaders in the QS company used to say that how many libraries and useful courses in a university are the one of main factors to judge whether this university should be high ranking or not. Furthermore, he still said that a good gym in a university will improve the ranking of one school too, but it does not make too much sense. Obviously, only when schools choose to invest majority of money on libraries and academics courses can they improve their ranking in the world.
Secondly, hardly do students not get a good GPA in the end of one semester if school invest vast money on libraries. As you know, many scholars need resources from their school libraries to finish their papers or essays, so only when schools have an excellent library can help them to write their assignment. For example, I am studying in a small college in the middle of our country, libraries in our school are pretty small and poor. Moreover, there are just few limited materials in our libraries. In this case, it is impossible for us to find enough materials to help us finish our essays. However, our sister school is in a big city and the leaders of her school are willing to spend on the libraries of their school. Therefore, they can find all books from all over the world when they are doing homework, hence, just this point helps them a lot to get a good GPA in the ending.
Certainly, it is undenied that gyms provide a good place for student doing exercise. I totally agree that students should spend at least one hour per day to do sports. However, even though schools do not provide them a gym to do sports, they still can go to parks outside schools to do exercise.
In conclusion, since investing money one libraries and academic classes can improve the ranking of one school, and investing money to build an excellent library can help students t get good grades in the ending, so I still insist my point that school should spend most money on libraries and academic courses, but not on gyms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rrently, the gym has been considered as an integrate part of a university. In this case, the...
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Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one library', 'a library', or simply 'libraries'?
Suggestion: one library; a library; libraries
... In conclusion, since investing money one libraries and academic classes can improve the ra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, in fact, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2298.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72839506173 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53360285429 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7392685202 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231181513279 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733234215123 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912951083342 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13396366473 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629305247527 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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