Some people believe that traveling to and living in numerous places increases one’s ability
to relate and connect to other people. Others believe that this ability is better cultivated by
living in one place and developing a deep understanding of that community.
Undoubtedly, our modern will be extremely peaceful with good communication of pepole. While many pepole believe that traveling or living in a lot of cities or vilages can improve our ability to connect, others agree with the obverse idea. Nevertheless, from my point of view, travel and living in the different locations are a good way to connect with people. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, travel help people to find new friends, which help them to have more friends. In fact, we are social creatures, and we can find a friend everywhere, so by traveling we get a chance to meet more people, and make a friend, which will help us to improve our ability to connect very well with others.
Second, we face a lot of challenges during the travel, so we need to get help from others by interacting and asking questions; even some questions about the location of a resturant or a hotel. As a result, these interactions will effectively help us to gradually know how to interact and connect with people.
Forthuremore, this is obvious that living for long time in one place has a lot of advantages such as having a lot of good friends, knowing more people, stable life and knowing all places in the city. In fact, with stable life we can have a deeper understanding of our society, which have help us to survive with peace and happiness. However, the inact life in a small city without any advanture is not a perfect way to enhance our ability to connect with all people, especially people that we do not know yet. For example, if you live in a small town and you have a lot friends, it dosen't mean that you can find a lot of friends in a large city.
Finally, travel and live in numerous locations can be completely useful, and people can get a lot of experiences during travel or consistent changing their town. In addition life can be very different in that locations that make people think about themselves and realise how they can face probable problems. In fact, people will contact with others and ask about living stuff, envirnoment, and even shopping centers. These all actions make a person to be a nice person.
In conclusion, our lifestyle can be a key factor for our future happiness by interacting with around people. people should know what they want from life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...l or consistent changing their town. In addition life can be very different in that loca...
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Line 11, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ness by interacting with around people. people should know what they want from life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, well, while, even so, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65384615385 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59499618064 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6366131624 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.555555556 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38888888889 5.21951772744 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199802088672 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664481019031 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599313064259 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998215104155 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471342891208 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.