Nowadays people do not stop debating about whether people do things well or not since they have a number of things to do. Although it seems plausible at first glimpse that people do their work very well, I would counter this point of view. I will enlarge on that issue in this essay.
Above all, due to nowadays situations, people have lots of work to do, that’s why they are often distracted and cannot focus on some especial things. To be more exact, when people are doing the first thing, they often think about how they should manage the second one and there is a same trend when they want to do the second thing, so they cannot concentrate on their work. My brother is a compelling example of that. He works as a bank employee and he is an active person in stock market, at the same time he is a teacher at a private institute. I believe that he does non-of them well since his bank costumers always complain about his work at the bank and he does not benefit from stock market. In addition, his students often claim that his colleagues teach them better than him. As a result, he can never do his works well.
The other reasons which deserves some words is that people often grumble about the limited time which they have for their works. To clarify this point, people try to do several things to achieve more benefit or to be satisfied with their work while they cannot obtain those goals since they do not allocate enough time to them. Take one professor in my MS degree university, for example. He manages 5 dissimilar companies while he is a professor at the university. At one time, we had a meeting and he was so anxious during it, so I felt that he wanted to do other things. At last, he claimed that why is not a day longer than 24 hours? Therefore, people do not assign enough time to do things since they want to do too many things that’s why they cannot do them well.
Another subtle point which I should deem lies on the fact that people are often sick to death of doing a number of things because they want to do several things simultaneously. As a result, they cannot do things well.
To sum up, based on aforementioned arguments, I am of the opinion that people do not do things well since they are busy doing several things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38186157518 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26568212373 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463007159905 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6699867097 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381554933642 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141200053251 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142140523208 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296944709185 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676578878807 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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