You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Today when everyone is working or pursuing a job for earning a livelihood, it is a common sight where one is stuck to his job for their entire life passionlessly as it provides a safety net for him and his family and deters him to try something new. But according to modern studies, it is not advisable to just stick to one career only. This essay would highlight some of the arguments to prove this point.
To begin with, One career is just not a viable option in today's volatile world where everything changes in a split of the second. For example - Numerous people suffer in a recession , millions of jobs are lost bringing unemployement rate higher and higher as everyone had just relied on a single career only and once that job has gone , people dont know what else to do as they have no other skills. This brings attention to the fact that everyone should aim of having multiple carriers and skills handy so that in case of situation like the above, they can choose alternative options and save their lives. Secondly, most of the people end up doing jobs due to financial reasons even if they dont like all their lives and living lives with any passion. Having another career would give one a hope and a choice to understand what they truely like and continue for lifelong and live happily.
In continuation with above, with multiple careers one get to see the best of multiple worlds and would have a better clarity of future as in where they want to continue or grow and spend their energies on. And there are many easy ways to do so as well. For example, today world is literally a global village where every one is connected to each other due to social media which brings so many possibilities of learning and trying their hands on alternate carriers.
Ofcourse, this would not be as simple because in a world when its so diffiult to find a single job , it would be challenging to find multiple ones. But with the help of online revolution, when world is full of opportunities there is no way this can not be done and acheived.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: ,
...e career only and once that job has gone , people dont know what else to do as the...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hen its so diffiult to find a single job , it would be challenging to find multipl...
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Message: Did you mean 'finding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: finding
... a single job , it would be challenging to find multiple ones. But with the help of onl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54716981132 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44459894461 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541778975741 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6523928459 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.769230769 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5384615385 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150920662851 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583890535034 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327787440041 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915529209491 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169628385057 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.