ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
Respected Director Sir,
This letter regards my lost student identification card due to which I am facing lots of difficulties as I am unable to complete various activities in college.
To begin with, I am Jack Nicolson , ID - 3456A. Yesterday while playing basketball yesterday on campus, apparantly I lost my student card by mistake. And even after umpteen number of efforts to locate that, I was severely disappointed to not find that. I have already tried to file the complaint in the student office but I have not heard much from them so far and hence I feel stuck here.
Due to the above, I have been facing various issues like non-issuance of books from the library, no admittance in various sports club as well as non-entrance to the computer lab which is causing huge distress me as I am unable to finish my courses on deadlines.
Therefore, can I please request you to issue me a new student card as soon as possible so that there are no hurdles and I continue my studies smoothly in future?
Finally, I really appreciate your prompt actions regarding the above.
Yours sincerely,
Jack Nicolson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ge. To begin with, I am Jack Nicolson , ID - 3456A. Yesterday while playing bas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, i feel, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84895833333 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78547562938 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661458333333 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8704276338 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 4.34317383033 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188309864186 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707110372616 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561354476294 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802779934269 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501757416643 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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