You have lost your student identification card This has created some problems for you Write a letter to the director of student services In your letteradvise them of your situationexplain how this is affecting yourequest a new card

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to let you know that I have lost my student identification card 2 days back.This has caused multiple issues and in return affecting my studies as well.

Let me explain you my condition in detail. When I was returning from college two weeks ago via bus, my wallet has been stolen.Inside that, I had my every important documents including my student identification card.Now as you know that our final semister exams are about to get start, I will need my card as early as possible so that I can attend my exam.Moreover, I require some books from library which will also need my card. So I am in great trouble if I donot get my card on time.

I would like to make a request for a new student identification card so that I can concentrate on my studies and able to give my exams without worrying.Please try to understand my situation and enroll me a new card at earliest.

Thank you in advance.
yours faithfully,
Monali.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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...ncluding my student identification card.Now as you know that our final semister exa...
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...s possible so that I can attend my exam.Moreover, I require some books from library whic...
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... able to give my exams without worrying.Please try to understand my situation and enro...
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...nd enroll me a new card at earliest. Thank you in advance. yours faith...
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...est. Thank you in advance. yours faithfully, Monali.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61494252874 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96480990406 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.921532071 44.8134815571 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237976734752 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123825262071 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632610213823 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164353981352 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640260208798 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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