The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities
The table and graph demonstrate the normal monthly temperatures and the tradition number of hours of sunshine every year in three global Metropolitans: London, Sydney and New York.
Overall , at the beginning of the year the Sydney’s temperature is The highest between 28 and 25 it is really hot compared to others, but the pick temperature which seen in July is almost 30 degrees and this city is New York.
However, New York’s and London’s temperature goes steady till March, in march the temperature of New York increases sharply and at that time Sydney’s degree star decreasing gradually and this action continue till middle of July, in that time Sydney reaches its lowest temperature about 16 degree after that period Sydney’s Celsius increases .Also, the others begin decreasing, between September and October Sydney’s degree pastes New York’s and London’s temperatures at 20 and 25. At the end of the year the temperature of New York is almost 5 degrees and the London’s one is just below 10 degrees , Sydney is the highest in temperatures again almost 25 degrees.
Tradition yearly hours of sunshine is almost the same in New York and Sydney it is 2535 and 2473. The lowest hours of sunshine is seen in London, to be exact it is 1180.
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- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 67
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: Also
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76902182659 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485849056604 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.234904741 43.030603864 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.666666667 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 22.9334400587 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180781801814 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131093912565 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892743179107 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160731169835 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977489269851 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.