The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2015, and future projections for 2025.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart depicts the data regarding Southland’s main exports of International tourism, dairy products and meat products in South land (exports are not in southland.) during 2000, 2015 and its forecasted figures forecast/projections for 2025.
Overall, it is evident from graph that the export in Southland increased dramatically in the domain of International tourism while the export of meat products decreased over the period. Considering the Diary product the export rose considerably before falling in 2025 as estimated.
International tourism was the greatest export earner among the three industries with more than 8 billion in 2000 (Discuss sentence structure with me: International tourism, with more than 8 billion pounds in revenue in 2000, was the greatest export earner among the three industries.) and it , It continues to increase steadily with almost 9 billion currently and is speculated to increase further reaching almost 10 billion in 2025.
However, the exports of Meat products dropped from 6 billion in 2000 to 5.5 billion in 2015 and is foreseen that the trade will continue to decline to decline consistently reaching almost half the export of International tourism in 2025.
While considering the trade of Diary products, the export The dairy product exports increased significantly from almost 7 billion in 2000 to around 10 billion in 2015 from 2000 to 2015 and it is projected that the trade the exports will drop by around 0.5 billion by the end of in 2025
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
...outh land exports are not in southland. during 2000, 2015 and its forecasted figures f...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...port earner among the three industries. and it , It continues to increase steadily ...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...arner among the three industries. and it , It continues to increase steadily with ...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to decline'.
Suggestion: to decline
...s foreseen that the trade will continue to decline to decline consistently reaching almost half the e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.275 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99972164018 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9610328146 43.030603864 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.25 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175775052747 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950823048058 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493014753615 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121940537646 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640184471197 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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