Some people believe that competitive sports both team and individual have no place in the school curriculum How far do you agree disagree

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Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum . How far do you agree disagree .

Some people argue that sports should not be in the school curriculum, there is a lot of debate around this in many parts of the world. Personally I disagree with this opinion for many reasons. There are a lot of positive thing that children could learn from plying sport.

Many sports have beneficial impact on health. It is impossible to argue against the fact that spots help pupils to keep fit, avoid obesity, and heart disease in the future. For example, according to a study people who played sports when they were young have better health then the people who did not participant, because s...

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there is a lot of debate
there are a lot of debates

There are a lot of positive thing
There are a lot of positive things

have better health then the people who did not participant, because sports creates a healthy basis for later life.
have better health than the people who did not participate, because sports create a healthy basis for the later life.

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