Some people think that Olympic games are exciting event that brings other nations together. Others say Olympics are expensive and waste of money that would be better spent on other things.
Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.
Actually some people's opinion related to Olympic games are engrossing occurence that makes majority of nations together. Other people rely on considerably opposite this facts this is why Olympic games demand pothera money and it is clear that government could spend money for other necessary things.
In my mind, this essay fully agree this point which games is the important our counrty's proud in reason it is become plenty of popularity to country. Therefore authority prefer this condition that development of Olympic games in the world .
An good example, nowadays, there are a lot of games in the world and futbol and tennis, box and basketball is the certainly might organise so much and Their winners is took prize by government special ones.
On the other facts, some people think about country's requirements and in my opinion is basically true facts however is thought drammatically enough an example, day by day,
Transport is improving and it invovles buses' increasing and improving ways condition.
Radically, different international games probably open to combine with other nation for this reason participants travelling around the world and take part in various games and it is opportunity know other nations culture and become many usefulness.
To sum up, Olympic games actually is important events in the world and it is increase only become popularity and really make chances in common with other counrties.
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Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: taken
...t organise so much and Their winners is took prize by government special ones. On...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun usefulness seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much usefulness', 'a good deal of usefulness'.
Suggestion: much usefulness; a good deal of usefulness
...y know other nations culture and become many usefulness. To sum up, Olympic games actually...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, really, so, therefore, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32894736842 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69947417274 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0157647861 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.875 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272485137943 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121253190445 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670792509731 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11736774785 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909484028368 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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