Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Most people in the world would like work similar organisation forever. But, there are those whooppose the idea. Such people prefer to work in different company. In this essay i will discuss both views and to reach a conclusion.
Firstly, the people work for various company wanted famous person by moving another company. Changing them to another company will help them gain experience.. In addition to, people may not enjoy working for the company they work for. Another reason is that people may be dissatisfied with low salaries in the company. This can cause them to change jobs. One more reason people work for different companies is because they are frustrated with what they are doing. This situation will lead them strike.
Secondly, people who work for the similar workplace all their lives are very loyal to their work. They do not care if they get paid a lot or not. Because they take pleasure what they do. Also, employees of the similar workplace become professionals. It takes a lot of experience to do that. Thus, it is obvious that professional life will be at the advantage in case he is employed in the same industry for a lifetime.
Finally, in my opinion, working in various workplaces is better than working in the similar workplaces. Because there is so much experience. For example, if you are a marketing people, all the marketing products you need (electronic, foods, clothes, automobiles and others). So you need to familirize yourself with all the products in your industry.
To conclude, we would prefer to work for different workplaces that could share us specific advantages to build confidence. Furthermore, working in various workplaces benefits us in our personal and professional lives.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r company will help them gain experience.. In addition to, people may not enjoy w...
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...not care if they get paid a lot or not. Because they take pleasure what they do. Also, ...
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...than working in the similar workplaces. Because there is so much experience. For exampl...
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...here is so much experience. For example, if you are a marketing people, all the m...
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...roducts in your industry. To conclude, we would prefer to work for different wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02447552448 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71810589613 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9267076754 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4782608696 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4347826087 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.4347826087 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378891295741 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098259027037 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106245029463 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201559184605 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421657623589 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... work similar organisation forever. But, there are those whooppose the idea. Such...
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Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
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...ork in different company. In this essay i will discuss both views and to reach a ...
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...ws and to reach a conclusion. Firstly, the people work for various company want...
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Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
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...r company will help them gain experience.. In addition to, people may not enjoy w...
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...p them gain experience.. In addition to, people may not enjoy working for the com...
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...ation will lead them strike. Secondly, people who work for the similar workplac...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...not care if they get paid a lot or not. Because they take pleasure what they do. Also, ...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...e they take pleasure what they do. Also, employees of the similar workplace becom...
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...es a lot of experience to do that. Thus, it is obvious that professional life wil...
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...same industry for a lifetime. Finally, in my opinion, working in various workp...
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...r a lifetime. Finally, in my opinion, working in various workplaces is better ...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...than working in the similar workplaces. Because there is so much experience. For exampl...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...here is so much experience. For example, if you are a marketing people, all the m...
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Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... marketing products you need electronic, foods, clothes, automobiles and others...
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Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ng products you need electronic, foods, clothes, automobiles and others. So you...
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Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...s you need electronic, foods, clothes, automobiles and others. So you need to f...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...roducts in your industry. To conclude, we would prefer to work for different wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02447552448 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71810589613 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9267076754 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4782608696 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4347826087 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.4347826087 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378891295741 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098259027037 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106245029463 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201559184605 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421657623589 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.