Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people.Some people think younger leader would be better.Do you agree or disagree?
People have diverse views about whether older or younger people are more advisable for organization to control.While I acquire to control in organization by older people but young people also manage well.The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.
One the one hand, elderly people can be good boss for several reasons.Firstly old people worked for many years, therefore their practice increased.Secondly older people have better employees with workers.Again,they know the job well.Thirdly they are work deliberately and carefully.I oppose the view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs
One the other hand, young leaders make their handworking to demand employees very responsible.They become energetic and creative.In young leaders,leading workers is more self-assured.One of their weakness is that young bosses are very hasty.Older people are more respect by workers than younger leaders.Additionally, younger bosses usually more demiurge, for that reason they are inclined to find newest and better advance which profits the absolute organization.For instance,a young leader can crop up with a new advertising for a produce,which helps to the developing to buy of the company.Even so, majority of people joined which older managers to control in organizations.
In conclusion, while I accept that younger controller can be the best leaders of a company,I admit important position can be given to younger leaders
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, even so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64545454545 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53805755177 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 395.6238393 49.4020404114 801% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 414.0 106.682146367 388% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.3333333333 20.7667163134 353% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 43.6666666667 7.06120827912 618% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27069609604 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204619248492 0.084324248473 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249225348828 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179379149494 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422070251158 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.8 13.0946893788 319% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.54 50.2224549098 -39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 11.3001002004 302% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.67 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.92 8.58950901804 139% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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