Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want.
Is this a good way to raise children?
What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
Parents' methods of raising a worthy citizen of society have always been a controversial one. An opinion exists that the liberal way, which provides children with wide freedom, is the most beneficial. I am convinced that this manner of parenting might result in negative consequences.
Forming children’s nature is an extremely difficult process in which parents are to find a middle ground. Allowing the child to do whatever they eager for is an extremely ineffective method. According to Richard Templar's book « Parenting Rules», the lack of inhibitions leads to moral corruption and decreased motivation in children. Thus, an overly libertarian upbringing method an educating affect detrimentally the child and should be considered as unproductive. Parents' methods of raising a worthy citizen of society have always been a controversial one. An opinion exists that the liberal way, which provides children with wide freedom, is the most beneficial. I am convinced that this manner of parenting is to be considered as poor and might result in negative consequences.
To my mind upbringing that does not imply restrictions and authority in the person of parents leads to a number of negative consequences. Permissiveness in the family results in the complication of interaction with others, since the child suppose that all his requirements should be satisfied. According to a study conducted by the University of Vienna, children who do not know prohibitions are more prone to depression due to not confirming high expectations for unfamiliar people. Thereby, the fulfillment of every whim of the child forms in the latter a distorted picture of reality, which might ruin their mental health.
The educational process, which includes only measures to encourage the child, leads to pampering. Over time, the baby will start to use physical strength to obtain the desirable, which might incur severe injuries. American psychologist Dr. Ekman considered a case when an eight-year-old girl used to choke her mother if the latter tried to forbid her anything. Hereby, indulging in all the whims of children might create addiction of using the physical force to acquire their wish.
Summing up, parenting is an extremely responsible process that requires more flexibility than excessive condescension from parents. Extremes in the form of permissiveness produce a number of negative consequences, condemning children in their older life to suffering.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44619422572 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13510660673 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3921863437 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.75 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 7.06120827912 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251683069015 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748827564643 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058466780119 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139118734706 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674587055295 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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