Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?
The ecosystem nowadays is gradually unbalanced by the impact leading to the extinction of creatures and loss of bio-diversity of humans. This essay will look at some primary causes of this and offer some possible solutions to the problem.
There are a number of reasons for the decrease of biodiversity. The first reason is that most are the major food of humans. On a daily basic, people all over the world consume a great amount of food (fish, meat, etc) which is necessary for the physical developing, and therefore, the reproduce of animals could not meet the need of humans, which make them disappear quickly. Another reason is overexploitation. Because of the current benefits, many people kill rare and valuable animals to get skin, hair, horn, and besides, not only animals but also plants is also exploited to decorate their houses, create herbals.
There are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above. Firstly, the government should encourage citizens as well as give an large funding to develop the disciplines of agriculture and fishery, this might help them expand the range of their farms and fulfil a number of requirements of food. The second one is that authorised organization should release a prohibition of exploiting animals and plants if no permission, this could significantly limit the problem of hunting and overuse, steadily make the ecosystem balance again.
In conclusion, there are many factors leading to the effects of human beings on ecosystem all over the world and measures can be implemented to tackle this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...the physical developing, and therefore, the reproduce of animals could not meet the need of h...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ould encourage citizens as well as give an large funding to develop the discipline...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12355212355 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79255495432 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4662641502 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.636363636 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15707102847 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572177108539 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963289650518 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116787289723 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105270971319 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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