Most companies and Organizations required their employees to wear uniforms to work.
What are the jobs that need this uniform to make it a good thing?
What are the disadvantages of wearing uniforms to work?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Work uniforms are in trend these days and most of the companies want their workers to wear that for the work. Wearing the same dress for work gives strength for the employees to work as a team under one organization. In the below paragraph I will explain both the advantages and disadvantages of wearing homogenous clothes for work.
The most important point of wearing a uniform to work is that they feel more confident and treat themself equally when working together. For example - No matter what is the financial status of the employee whether he/she can or cannot afford expensive or professional clothes for work but they have to wear same type of cloth and they feel that they are on same level. Moreover, It is not very time-consuming because every morning employees do not need to waste time choosing what to wear but with the uniform, they know this is the only dress they can wear for work. Secondly, if we see in the food court, Hospitals, Airline crew they wear a uniform for their work and with that way, Every customer knows that who is the staff member and they can easily ask for help from them.
On the other hand, Change is the law of nature and everybody needs a change. Wearing the same dress for work, Employees feel very boring and cannot enjoy their work. As a result, they do not work as a productive employee. Furthermore, Sometimes employees do not feel comfortable in the uniform and frustrate, In the end, they have to leave the job.
To conclude, wearing a uniform to work is a good thing and shows the discipline and standard of the company but Sometimes employees want the freedom to wear anything they want to work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63605442177 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4714491502 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496598639456 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2245844203 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.583333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430194250655 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192112971423 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954773609714 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30490959152 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541140145123 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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