Shortage of Housing has given several social consequences. Only government can solve the problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write at least 250 words.
shortage of houses is a huge problem and especially in big cities. it acts as a magnet for the young generation. Some people believe that only government bodies can solve this issue and I totally agree with this because this kind of situation is not possible to solve by common people. In this essay, I will explain the reason and solutions.
The main reason for the problem is that increase in population leads to the problem of shortage of houses in the urban areas. Every day youngsters are coming to big cities to try their luck and end up settling there and as a result, it becomes a dream for the common man to buy their own house. For Instance - big cities like Hyderabad, Delhi, and Mumbai in India are very crowded cities from all over the country because of more employment opportunities and quality education everyday people are coming to these cities. Therefore, if the government plan to organize a city structure especially residential areas that would help. However, the government has the power and authority to demolish the old buildings and make apartments and houses so that more people can live.
Furthermore, the Government should make new rules for the property rates for example - property rates should be fixed and people can purchase directly from the owner because recently, as we saw real estate change the market demand. for example - agents or brokers purchase land at lower rates and sell to common people at a very high rate this affects the market price.
To conclude, this kind of problem only government can resolve and with better strategies and decisions but individuals can help them by giving suggestions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91397849462 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55837977578 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9584980827 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199596567068 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073547965481 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448573862533 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121312805288 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147142258939 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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