Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write at least 250 words.
Education is the key to success, but education reform is an issue for the last few decades and many changes have taken place. Some people think that schools should be more entertaining by organizing more and more activities while others oppose that. I agree with the former point, In my opinion, Schools should always be entertaining so that children can study there as well as enjoy.
The main reason for the entertainment in the schools is children feel more confident and go to school. For example - if schools arrange more and more seminars, cultural and talent-based hunts, children like to take part in the activities. In the end, this will help to enhance their skills and knowledge. Therefore, they feel more confident while going to school. Secondly, some classes are online, and teachers use visual media to study like presentations, video tutorials. However, this method is very useful for children. They learn easily and enjoy the class as compared to attending boring and long classes. Finally, mental and physical growth both is essential for children of all ages. Therefore, schools organize national and international level games competition.
On the other hand, Some people believe that by using the entertainment source in schools distract children. For example -one U.K based research shows that 50% of the children do not like to read books because they like to learn from youtube. Moreover, visual entertainment affects the eyesight of children at a very low age. Therefore, schools should encourage children to read books, and education should be as simple as possible.
To conclude, I believe schools have to be more entertaining but the discipline level must be zero and entertainment help children to gain more knowledge with pressure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: K
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20701754386 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76202530829 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8393538185 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2941176471 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282375983657 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09392790999 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756083852224 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192983925666 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643222101962 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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