After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
Express your appreciation
And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear Jones,
I am Shailabh, same person whom you helped last month, writing this letter from St. Theresa Hospital, to express my gratitude for timely helped you provided, which eventually saved my life.
I still remember last month's saturday night when my car lost balance and hit the tree on the left side of the road. In that dark night, i was told that, it was you who stopped by and called the ambulance and provided first aid till ambulance arrived. Doctor repeatedly mentioned to me that if i was not brought to the hospital on time, chances of my survival was negligible. I feel like, I got second chance to live and you are my savior. I couldn't thank you enough for generousity and kindness you have shown towards an unacquanited man. In today's world, where your own family and friend might not be trustred in bad times, you came forward and saved an unknown person. People like you has helped to keep humans and humanity alive.
Doctor is saying that I will be discharged by Saturday, a week before christmas. Myself and family desparately wants to meet you and thank you for your grand gesture in person. It would be great if you can visit us on night of christmas, such that i can see my christ who helped me to reborn.
Regards,
Shailabh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t side of the road. In that dark night, i was told that, it was you who stopped b...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ctor repeatedly mentioned to me that if i was not brought to the hospital on time...
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Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...chance to live and you are my savior. I couldnt thank you enough for generousity and ki...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sit us on night of christmas, such that i can see my christ who helped me to rebo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, still, as to, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6017699115 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38770836277 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650442477876 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.248038249 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5454545455 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295196339758 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10018050269 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861633429284 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208268392971 0.12726935374 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00784729063199 0.0580467560999 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.