Some people think that basic healthcare should be free for everyone. Others believe people
should pay their own medical costs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Primary healthcare is one of the most critical components of a healthy, prosperous society. However, because of its high cost, there is an ongoing debate about whether it should be free or whether individuals should be responsible for paying their health fees.
On the one hand, the belief that basic healthcare should be virtually free is reinforced by two major reasons, one of which is that health is a fundamental requirement for a functional society. Therefore, governmental bodies should front the bill for medical services. Another impetus for this is the sheer unaffordability of well-being services. While wealthier people may effortlessly pay out of their own pocket without too much trouble, the more impoverished may skip going to doctors even when necessary because they cannot afford it. This acts as a catalyst for a less healthy society, overall.
On the other hand, despite the motivations mentioned above to provide free healthcare for everyone, there is strong justification as to why it should be paid for by the individuals who use it. One argument is that having to pay for one's own medical services creates an incentive to stay sane. For example, individuals who feel that they may receive medical care without any charge or fee are less likely to care for themselves. Another related vindication is that those adopting healthy living should not be subsidizing the clinic expenditure for those who make poorer lifestyle choices. That is a person who exercises every day should not have their taxes used for the health costs of a person who refuses to exercise out of laziness.
In conclusion, the merits of charging healthcare fee overshadow the demerits as it brings about higher accountability for one's life. Moreover, I feel that an ideal solution is for governments to diminish the costs of medical services so that everyone can afford it. If we can fix the affordability problems without removing the incentives to stay healthy, we will be better off shortly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... brings about higher accountability for ones life. Moreover, I feel that an ideal so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10736196319 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88768287892 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558282208589 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9381984821 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308208217188 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978051878171 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559180993607 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188588711065 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555387792147 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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