The graph shows date about the average saturday salesof two bakeries in london in 2010. Summerize the information by selecting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below gives information around a saturday daily sales of two bakeries in London in 2010.
Overal, it is cleaelr that, Bernie's Buns bakery saw huge increases in virtually every revenues, while you can see lovely loaves was ledt far behind from the Burnie's Buns.
In 2010 Burnie's Buns sold out 140 kg droughnuts which was the highest amount among all other products. Likewise, droughnuts baked by Lovely Loaves sold out 120 kg. A bit less than 120 kg cookies were sold to customers from Burnie's Buns while the Lovely loaves 65kg were purchased which were 35 kg less than Burnie'a Buns. Also sales of the products of Burnies Buns took the lead in almost all product sales such as cakes which was 105 kg, approximately 25 kg more than Lovely Loaves
Interestingly, the common figure was in sales among both bakeries can be seen in the sale of toasted sandwiches which were equal to 23 kg. Furthermore, less than 80 kg rolls were sold from Burnies Buns whilst 45 kg from the Lovely loaves. However, the lowest point was for Lovely loaves was in salad's sales in which there were only about 18 kg though 62 kg salads were sold by Burnies Buns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, likewise, so, while, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63414634146 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26325693311 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556097560976 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.901604953 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.057885707499 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481011516974 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095088093969 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879266383822 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121453967955 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.