A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages of it in your community and state your opinion.
At present, my community is on the way of development. New roads, collages and other new projects has been passed to build in my area as government is putting efforts to improve its infrastructure and develop it as other metropolitan cities. Undoubtly, the people of my community will warmly welcome this new project because it will give birth to numerous opportunities but unwillingly it will also discover some problems. Let's discuss both sides in further paragraphs.
On the first hand, firstly, a new company will solve the problem of unemployment. For example, it will create more jobs for youngsters. Secondly, it will also help to improve the infrastructure of my city because it will create more business which are directly or indirectly interlinked with this new company like restaurants, hotels and houses workers who lives in other states and towns. Most importantly, it will help to boost the economy which will lead to better life style in the long run.
On the other hand, uncertainly, this project will lead to some consequences. First and foremost is pollution, like air, noise, land and water pollution. To illustrate, big project needs land so they need to clear the area by cutting trees and by clearing farms. Furthermore, it will also increase the waste rate. Moreover, as it will attract more workers and people which will lead to overcrowding or unwillingly create chances to boost up the crime rate of my city.
To sum up, after describing the both merits and demerits, I can support this new idea on the basis of some conditions which include major points like company needs to be built far from the heart of the town and they have to have proper waste management and other pollution controlling equipment as a result it will prove boon rather than curse for city people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 424, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ly it will also discover some problems. Lets discuss both sides in further paragraph...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95394736842 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77265754244 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555921052632 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.1118259801 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0461520948842 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0204722094628 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261807008058 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0304749895115 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284654474461 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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