Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the skyrocketing development of technology, the past decades have witnessed huge progress of the society. While this brings about increasing living standards, some may argue that it also gives birth to some rules, which are too strict for young people to follow. However, I do not agree with this opinion. From my perspective, it is beneficial for young people to follow these rules, since they help the youth to develop good behaviors and also protect them from potential dangers.
To begin with, the current rules help to keep young people on the right track. To be more specific, in today's sophisticated world, every now and then, young people are susceptible to diverting from the right path to a place where they are far from success. By making even a couple of decisions erroneously, their whole future might go to waste. In this vein, setting rules can teach them the best way of life and thus keep them on the right track. For example, in Shanghai, there are many middle and high schools where many specific rules are set, like wearing uniforms etc. Seemingly unnecessary for students to buy uniforms, it frees them from worrying their clothes, so they can be more focused more on academic work.
Furthermore, these rules can benefit the society as a whole. Rules and regulations are made by the authorities to let society run in an orderly way, without which the society or country will fall in a turmoil. Hence, it is universally acknowledged that abiding by the regulations contributes to the maintenance of the society order. Namely, if everybody follows the regulations, then the society will become more harmonious. Relationships and family bonds will become tighter, and the workflows in factories and companies will become smoother. Thus, well-being and satisfaction can be truly bettered, therefore doing good to everyone. For example, a man who obeys the regulations of his company will help the company to make more united efforts, so more achievements can be made. In return, he can gain more recognition which promises him a brighter future.
However, some rules impose unnecessary restrain on the young generation. There does exist some regulations, like students have to follow a certain answering patterns in order to gain the points in exams. With higher points, they can be admitted to their ideal academies. This may curb their creativity and imagination in some way. Nonetheless, the solution to this problem is not acting against the rules. Only by trials and errors, will the regulations system become better in the future.
In a nutshell, the merits of obeying rules prevail over the demerits. Therefore, I suppose the rules that current society expects the young people to follow are not too strict, as they can keep the youth on the right track and help to maintain the society order.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...pecific, in todays sophisticated world, every now and then, young people are susceptible to divert...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an orderly way" with adverb for "orderly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e by the authorities to let society run in an orderly way, without which the society or country w...
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Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'pattern'?
Suggestion: pattern
...ents have to follow a certain answering patterns in order to gain the points in exams. W...
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Line 7, column 443, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regulations'' or 'regulation's'?
Suggestion: regulations'; regulation's
...es. Only by trials and errors, will the regulations system become better in the future. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i suppose, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2376.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04458598726 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68319488706 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522292993631 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.94265232975 303% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4284926475 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3846153846 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1153846154 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223593996217 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603601484232 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619150062082 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142446981014 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750054116644 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.