Nowadays, a lot of buildings such as offices and schools are now being built with an open plan design. Why is that? Do you see this as a positive or negative?
Currently, several architectural designs are available in the market but the open plan layout is high on demand for the structures like private offices or educational centers. There are ample of reasons for this trend to become popular. I perceive this as a advantageous trend. My inclination along with the reasons are justified in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason is that the current trend of making working place modern. Adding to this point, open plan layout looks modern structure because of its open windows which attracts more people to work. Moreover, due to open structure offices and schools require less lights and natural light gives lighter ambience to work. For instance, majority of IT offices are adapting this type of structure nowadays.
The biggest merit of this layout is that it provides energetic atmosphere. Additionally, offices and schools require attention to work or study and open layout provides them natural ambience so that they can focus. Furthermore, cost of making will also reduce. Similarly, the open layout structure is made up of the glass and transparent material which are less in cost hence the cost of making such building will dwindle. Likewise, due to these type of structure indoor plants can grow easily because they get the natural light which helps them to grow.
However, I would not overlook the darker side that it provides less privacy. Also, due to open structure it is to get disturbed due to the outside hush and rush. Likewise, light pollution in the room also increases and this may be disturbing for many individuals.
To conclude, it can be said that open layout is a new concept in the world of architecture hence many sectors are adapting it in their designs; along with this, its natural environment and cheap cost are the major positives that it provides. However, difficulties like less privacy and light pollution are hindering this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, similarly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0786163522 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62444510627 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512578616352 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9322093422 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7222222222 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178166814393 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555947943194 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391958099834 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104214789107 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286277612228 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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