Why are people ford of dangerous sports?
There is an opinion that some people are obsessed with extreme sports and dangerous behavior. While some seek bright emotions, others aim to make their life more exciting and adding more risk. However, some people go in for dangerous sports and act unsafe just because they want to have fun. I will state the reasons why I am convinced that this is true.
First, dangerous sports and behavior bring people emotions that cannot be found during the ordinary everyday life. Behavior psychologists explain that taking part in extreme sports affects the humans’ brain and influences people's emotional state. Bright feelings that appear during skydiving and rally race impress and entertain participants, making them craving for more and more. The more one’s emotional level is growing, the more one will be addicted to this dangerous type of entertainment.
By the same token, others are looking for risk and extreme to supplement the boredom around their daily routine. People who are not fulfilled with their dull daily life often search for additional excitement and risky joy. Norwegian scientists state that extreme sports increase the level of adrenaline in the blood, making people feel more excited and energetic. The joy of risk involves participants going into more dangerous places and making wrong decisions.
Nonetheless, some people are just having fun and cherish life moments during extreme sports and acting unsafe. It is a certain kind of people who fail to see the difference between safe and dangerous things. Moreover, these men lose the understanding of reality and the gap between regular and extreme sport, safe and risky behavior. Apparently, this makes them feel fine while enjoying dangerous leisure or hobby and while acting unsafely. Thus, people are wrong to think that high-speed driving or parachute jumping is a normal part of a holiday.
To sum up, it appears that people are addicted to dangerous sports and behavior because they seek bright emotions. At the same time, other people want to risk, which will make them feel alive. Nevertheless, a certain number of people go in for extreme sports just for entertaining and fun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, thus, while, kind of, to sum up, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18571428571 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51607241711 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525714285714 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.1996565902 48.9658058833 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.75 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320391561781 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111013186503 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799803518757 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209108005837 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525856303031 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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