The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines.
The cover of a book cannot predict the contend inside it. Perhaps, it may belie the original subject matter inside it. Here, the author contends that the best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the charachter of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines. I strongly disagree with the contention that the writer has presented.
First of all, generally we human have tendency to judge by looking it's outer token appearance, we usually juadge a book by observing it's cover. When we come up into the conclusion watching it's token appeareance, possibly, it has huge probability that our speculation might not be valid. Consequently, the author's claim might not hold true. For the supporting example, we can see the previous president of United States Mr. Trump. Outside world, people may think that all people in America are alike Mr. Trump. a artless, narcissist, and a rude person. While in reality, it is not true. We cannot say that all people in America are alike Trump. At the same time, he is the hero of America chosen by it's people. If we judge all American people as he is, it might not be true. So we cannot certainly say the author's claim.
Second of all, in case of Nepal, we see there is a communist government, by simply seeing this we cannot say that all people in Nepal are communist and have adopted communist philosophy. For instance, last time when our teacher went to Nepal, he did not find what he was expecting, he initially used to think, Nepal is alike china with communist governmetn, all strict, no democracy, no human rights. However, in reality, he finds it's nothing different than a democratic country. This also proves that it is unscrupulous to judge by the heros of the government.
Third of all, South Africa has a national hero called Nelson Madela, he is a very eminent and reverd person even in the world. His sacrifices were increadible. If we judge all people in South Africa as he is, it might not be true. There are so many opportunistic, obsequious politicians as well. The image of Mandela cannot reflct absolutely to all of his people who have chosed him as a hero.
In sum, it is unfair to judge the people by simply seeing the heroes or heroines the society has choosen. I strongly disagree with the assertion the writer has made. This could be unfair and migh lead to the wrong evaluation system.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
The cover of a book cannot predict the contend inside it. Perhaps, it may belie the or...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, we usually juadge a book by observing its cover. When we come up into the conc...
^^
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... States Mr. Trump. Outside world, people may think that all people in America are...
^^
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
... people in America are alike Mr. Trump. a artless, narcissist, and a rude person....
^
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... people in America are alike Mr. Trump. a artless, narcissist, and a rude person....
^
Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...reality, he finds its nothing different than a democratic country. This also proves ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, third, well, while, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68396226415 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59265382621 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495283018868 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 6.24550561798 320% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.777461957 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5555555556 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7037037037 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03703703704 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213353940804 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569594099353 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141540971273 0.0758088955206 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147133382013 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183691028214 0.0667264976115 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
The cover of a book cannot predict the contend inside it. Perhaps, it may belie the or...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, we usually juadge a book by observing its cover. When we come up into the conc...
^^
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... States Mr. Trump. Outside world, people may think that all people in America are...
^^
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
... people in America are alike Mr. Trump. a artless, narcissist, and a rude person....
^
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... people in America are alike Mr. Trump. a artless, narcissist, and a rude person....
^
Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...reality, he finds its nothing different than a democratic country. This also proves ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, third, well, while, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68396226415 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59265382621 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495283018868 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 6.24550561798 320% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.777461957 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5555555556 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7037037037 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03703703704 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213353940804 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569594099353 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141540971273 0.0758088955206 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147133382013 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183691028214 0.0667264976115 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.