Some people say that the Olympic Games no longer play a role in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?
An ever-increasing popularity of the Olympics has been observed since last decade. However, it is thought by few people that these games do not play pivotal role in the current century. I disagree with this viewpoint and believe that the Olympic sports are significant events because they are considered as a economy booster for host nation and motivational factor for sportsmen.
To commence with, one of the most conspicuous facts is that the Olympics have positive effect on the economy of the country in which they are being organized. In other words, it is considered as a source of income for the host country because the arrangement of such huge event not only attracts hordes of tourists to visit that country but also multinational organizations to invest money during such ceremony. For example, as per the report published in the Economy Times, the Dubai became tourist attraction after the arrangement of Olympic Games in 2012 which hiked its economy by 14% in 2013. Therefore, it seems obvious to say that the Olympics play pivotal role in the current century owing to its financial benefits.
Furthermore, the Olympics seem to be a motivational factor for the people associated with sports. This means to say that the medals and the monetary amount won by players make them and their country proud which further encourages more people to engage in different sports. The best illustration of this is that 20% youngsters in Canada have engaged themselves in acquiring skills to play hockey, Kabbadi, Baseball after winning the gold medal in the Olympic conducted in 2019. Thus, this encouragement will continue in future as well.
To conclude, while some people think that this sport event does not play vital role in 21st century, I disagree with this view and think that these games are continue to play paramount importance for both country and sportspersons in the current century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06050955414 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71737430034 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544585987261 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0019600945 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.416666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239355455394 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868553300758 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780571721372 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150061091567 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449315218302 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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