It is often argued that whether majority of people are becoming dependent or self-reliant. This essay will discuss how people are reliant on domestic help and how they have become financially stable. I strongly believe that earning potential makes people more independent.
There are several reasons why individuals are considered as dependent. To begin with, in the fast paced world, everyone is in rush and hardly get time to indulge in domestic chores. They prefer to hire an external source in order to maintain the basic life. For instance, hiring a full-time maid for cleaning, cooking or baby- sitting will eventually save their time, however, makes them dependent on someone else. Moreover, basic household work takes up alot of time which is not ideal for working people. Hence, they are considered as depending on other people.
On the other hand, there are various arguments in favour of independence. First of all, a good percentage of people have become financially self-dependent which gives them the confidence to take the reins of life in the their own hands. Earning potential not only makes people to do things on their own, but helps them to support their families as well. For example, the ratio of dependency decreases after graduation as they start their employment. Not only men, but women are also becoming more self-supporting than ever before. Hence, it is significantly clear that being financially strong helps to promote individualism.
To summarise, although people have become more independent by earning money as they can their decisions whether small or big, they often rely on the other people in order to get the domestic chores done. I would like to reiterate that people should try to do their works and become fully self-sufficient.
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...confidence to take the reins of life in the their own hands. Earning potential not only m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...independent by earning money as they can their decisions whether small or big, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15916955017 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78528014159 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581314878893 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3165640374 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7058823529 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233218358287 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740539594389 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634038410344 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157337516115 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669807235855 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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