In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
In the future no one will publish and use printed newspapers and books, since thanks to modern technologies and the Internet, people are able to learn all the news and read the books they need via the Internet. On the one hand this statement has truthful wards about the future and it's advantages, but on other hand , there negative signs.
The positive side of this is that you can get more through the Internet than through the traditional method of printing books and newspapers. Since people are unlikely to be able to find the book they need without the Internet, take for example small towns with 3 or 4 bookstores and few stalls with newspapers. In such cities, people cannot always find the information they need or something else that can be learned through books or newspapers, so almost the entire population of the earth uses the Internet, because there you can find everything you want.
If we move on to the negative aspects, then we can immediately start with the fact that not all elderly people can use modern devices and therefore they prefer printed newspapers and books. It should also be noted that many people believe that reading online worsens health and can lead to cancer, and this is not the case. When reading through the screen, you can slightly spoil your eyesight, but this will not lead to other bad consequences as it has been proven by scientists.
In conclusion, I can only write that I do not agree with this. Indeed, one way or another, there are still many aspects of the fact that printed newspapers and books should be preserved not only for the elderly and healthy vision of people, but also for the future generation, which can also use this method of obtaining information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re and its advantages, but on other hand , there negative signs. The positive ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4561810285 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523333333333 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9399689334 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.5 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259561298129 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982512632771 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700511728451 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153604880916 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491946134997 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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