Air travel has gained a significant popularity amongst the society. While some people believe that it is beneficial to travel via airplane, others believe that that it should not be used frequently. I personally think that air transport is an efficient way of commuting as it saves our precious time and ensures less tiring journey.
On the one hand, there are various benefits associated with travelling by air. First of all, it not only saves valuable time, but provides comfortable journey. As business class provides several amenities, people do not feel exhausted and reach to the destination comfortably. For instance, reaching goa by train takes approx 36 hours, whereas, the distance can be covered in 2.5 hours by plane. Hence, it is comparatively easy to travel by air mode. Second, famous celebrities have achieved so much due to the availability of air transport. In simple words, they can easily fulfill their work commitments to reach at different places within few hours in a day. For example, Priyanka Chopra a guiness world record holder confirmed in an interview that she could travel in 3 countries in a day as she was sleeping in flights only and can obtain different projects. Thus, there are no more geographical barriers in obtaining success.
On the other hand, people who supports the reduction of flights says that it is the predominant cause of air pollution as it emits hazardous substances such as carbondioxide which has detrimental impacts on the environment. In a recent survey, air quality index was increased by 26% because of increasing air transportation by 48%. In addition, this means is suitable for people who are suffering from cardiovascular disease. If someone needs an urgent medical assistence then it would really be difficult to tackle the situation immediately. Although they have certain equipments, it is not always useful.
To summerise, although airplane contributes to few problems such as affects air quality and not suitable for health patients, these issues can be overlooked by taking preventive measures. I firmly believe that this is the best mode of transport in terms of time saving and convenience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... to travel via airplane, others believe that that it should not be used frequently. I per...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...ely easy to travel by air mode. Second, famous celebrities have achieved so much due to the availa...
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Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ummerise, although airplane contributes to few problems such as affects air qualit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, really, second, so, then, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18803418803 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95276021155 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623931623932 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7870537776 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8421052632 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26315789474 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253142417024 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723078596389 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744419151778 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157159696092 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075915437782 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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