Some people think that children should aim to their best at what they are doing. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
In the modern era, the effort of youngsters in their lives is becoming a topic of debate. Many people still harbor a concern that the young generation does not need to excel in anything, as opposed, I am of the opinion that setting an effort is essential for young life.
On the one hand, there are several compelling reasons accounting for why the opponents suppose that significant goals that youngs fail to target their best. Firstable, spending too much time on study is straightly affected to children lives. Detailly, children who study for the sake of exceptional academic results are more likely to squander a lot of time to immerse in set texts, which leads to the shortage of time for exhilarating outdoor activities. As a result, the lack of playtime is the cause of a poorly childhood and many soon mental health diseases such as stress or depression. In addition, the wrong division about children will destroy the natural endowments of any person, especially children because of those unclear opinion formation. As a matter of fact, the relaxation and comfort in childhood are acceptable.
On the other hand, despite the fact that childhood is the only time that people technically enjoy their life, however, several children had developed negative instincts at this time. Hence, clear goals will straightly stimulate for children the sense of effort and passion are essential things in the own life. Children who fully understand their innate force and develop it in a healthy manner with the help of family and community will enhance and accelerate its development. Detailly explain, this environment will spread out the sense of supposition and attention which lead the children the happiness feelings by some ways this will lighten the depression and loneliness of the children.
To conclude, while many people support the idea of mildness in youth, I still believe that the early awareness and effort of children are the key reasons for a brilliant generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy manner" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...stand their innate force and develop it in a healthy manner with the help of family and community w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, still, while, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09509202454 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69380523118 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4235930706 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.769230769 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148222855044 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493197446143 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321611138437 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082252849994 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334269563683 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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