Task 2: Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Some people hold the view that climate change disadvantage commerce, while there is also an opinion that business benefits from this situation. Before I render my opinion, it is important to take a glance at the argument on both sides.
There are several reasons why people might argue that climate change is a immense chance for trade. The key reason is that if this phenomenon occurs, they will give new opportunities for start-ups. This promotes the establishment and development of start-up companies which start business in green and environmentally friendly products. To give just one example, some plants manufacture products referred to as Eco-friendly Decking, Recycled Paper, coffee cups. As a result, they are attractive in customer' eyes and companies' revenue would thrive each year. Furthermore, innovative companies will survive and flourish with good initiatives. For instance, an energy-saving system can save totally an amount of money. Thus, prices remain unchanged without compromising emission standard.
There are stronger reasons to argue that new regulations on climate change may hurt businesses in several ways. Governments should introduce the strict rules about gas emissions and wastewater discharge. The most vital reason is that the business has to limit the use of fossil fuels and coal, which are common and highly available and switch to renewable energy, which is too expensive consist of solar energy, geothermal energy and wind energy. Therefore, plants have to raise product prices and lowers competitiveness. They are confronted with economic downturn.
In conclusion, it is clear that protecting the environment is huge role, while some people concentrate on finding a mount of money from business. Hence, I agree with the former view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48540145985 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91117594602 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656934306569 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1369257423 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4117647059 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118878755851 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374206143599 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460379892877 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824888733437 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399258323758 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.