Nowadays people live longer after they retire. How does this affect individuals and society? What can be done about this?
In the contemporary era, the extraordinary research and development in pharmaceutical sector successfully able to tackle most of the chronicle and fatal diseases which earlier considered to be taboo in the society. Retired people now a days have advantages to live longer because of distinct medications. This longevity affects myriads of individuals and society. In the following paragraphs, I would address the tendency’s causes and its impacts.
Firstly, long life of people in the nation after retirement reflects the impeccable and effective healthcare system. Also, nation’s healthcare system substantiates its reputation and credibility which attracts many overseas patients in the country, adding revenue to the economy which further credit into the government’s revenue. Secondly, people in the country gets more time to spend with their loved ones to create more memories by taking care in the time when required most.
On the contrary, longer durations of life also put extra weight to the government budget and proliferates their expenses on government aided policies for older people. Moreover, retirement homes become indispensable for those older people who do not have any supportive hands or family member to take care of them. Additionally, it is not an easy task for a normal person to bear the sky touching surgery treatments and medical bills, so they seek government help for the same in the way of pensions, free treatments and check-ups and many more.
In conclusion, long lived retire people are also valuable assets to the society because they have had contributed their time and efforts in the country’s growth and taking care of them in the later stage is the prime responsibility of every one of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...be taboo in the society. Retired people now a days have advantages to live longer because ...
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Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...aboo in the society. Retired people now a days have advantages to live longer because ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34420289855 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98764126278 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634057971014 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8127425809 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.090909091 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16802782229 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675959318414 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694500451502 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990081041453 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510484751698 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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