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Sometimes tourists may damage touristic sites. Explain what some of the negative effects may be. Suggest some solution to this problem.
It is well know that tourism industry brings enormous benefit to a country’s development. In fact, for many citizens of some exotic realms, it may be one of the major sources of income. While the growing tourism sector poses a threat to a scenic spots, habitat and ecosystem. While there are several reason for this alarming, some effective measures can be taken by government to tackle this problem.
Firstly, to tackle the problem of travelers damaging the flora, fauna or even historical landmark. Administration should motivated tourists to cooperate in the preservation and conservation of n...
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Administration should motivated tourists to cooperate
Administration should motivate tourists to cooperate
the state should imposed strict penalties
the state should impose strict penalties
government may detain of fine a tourist who cause damage or vandalism to touristic sites.
government may detain or fine a tourist who causes damages or vandalism to touristic sites.
that by imposing the strict penalties on tourists is at best a short-term solution to preserve touristic sites.
that imposing the strict penalties on tourists is at best a short-term solution to preserve touristic sites.
that by imposing the strict penalties on tourists, it is at best a short-term solution to preserve touristic sites.
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