Once children start school teacher have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Students have many people around them who influence their life. But, when children start their academic career, the teacher role is far bigger than their parents. This essay will explain both the aspects of this statement and why teachers are more influence children rather than their parent. It is discussed in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of things which indicated that the teachers have a major role in behind children behavior. First and foremost, students spend much more quality time in school with their teachers therefore, they get valuable information through a teacher. That will create an impact on student's life. For example, Dr A. p. j Abdul kalam Sir was the most successful man, and he says that; “All the argument was because of his math teacher”.
Moreover, In students mind, the role model is only the teacher because they feel their teachers are the perfect person in the world. So, they start following the teacher's instruction, which helps them for building their career. That will develop their social and financial life. For example, Mr Mukesh ambani is the richest and social stable person, he followed teacher instruction honestly.
However, sometimes children behavior is upon their genes and their house atmosphere. Parents in the house also gendered impact on children mine which scene in their daily activity and thinking. In addition, if students came from a good background, they are definitely well in education and discipline.
To conclude, students are influenced by their genes and home atmosphere but, the major role is up to their teachers because they spend lots of time in school. Overall, I strongly feel teachers generate a high impact on their behavior and character rather than parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... teacher. That will create an impact on students life. For example, Dr A. p. j Abdul kal...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...the world. So, they start following the teachers instruction, which helps them for build...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21678321678 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49236694772 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566433566434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8003608971 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236330348921 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078305443709 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557725177061 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144733752654 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053685656814 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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