more and more people are using the Internet to do their attacks rather than doing in person. do the advantages of this strain outweigh the disadvantage
In this high-tech era, there are various facilities developed, which made humans’ life smooth. The majority of people are using the Internet for shopping, hotel booking, and banking therefore their personal effort on that task is decreased. This essay will explain both sides of this phenomena and also discussed which side dominant the most. That described in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with there are plenty of benefits of the Internet. First and foremost, if people can do their bank work with help of the Internet, then they save their valuable time, which is the main benefit of technology. Furthermore, online shopping sites provide a huge discount on all products, which will help people to save some amount of money. for example, Amazon, Flipkart, and Mintra put the discount on all items during the Diwali festival. Those are the main pros of the Internet.
On the other hand, it also has drawbacks, which create a negative impact on humans’ life. Firstly, The use of the Internet in the banking sectors has a risk of cybercrime. people can be lost their data and money because of that Internet service. Secondly, if people buy any products from the online platform, then people cannot find satisfaction with that item. For instance, online shopping sites upload high-quality products’ picture, but they delivered low category products, therefore customers cannot satisfied with it. Those are major cons of the Internet.
to conclude, although the Internet is very reasonable for mankind, it also has plenty of disadvantages. In my opinion, the advantages of the Internet do not alkaline the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25095057034 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71155717695 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3833595458 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2352941176 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203549144529 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643740359745 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656523244245 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126064029209 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022609191589 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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