some people think the main benefit of the international cooperation is in production of the environment while other thing that the main benefit is in the wall business please go to both of you and give your opinion
In this present era, a numbers of new cooperation are started. Few people believe the main factor of that cooperation is protecting the environment, whereas others do not support that statement. They feel the main benefit of international cooperation is the world business. This essay will explain both expect and also give my opinion. That described in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of reasons which indicated cooperation is for saving nature. First and foremost, some countries made a committee and start some movement such as “no plastic use”. That reduces the amount of soil pollution. In addition, international NGO like WHO makes one day an environmental day, in which local authorities plant a tree. For example, more than 8000 trees were planted in last year's environmental day in India, which was written by one newspaper. Those are things that push people to think cooperations are useful for nature.
On the other hand, there are numbers of things which say corporation helps to expand businesses. Firstly, international cooperation provides a market all around the world, which will help to sale maximum products. secondly, because of the international market, the demand for any products increase. That will create a huge amount of profit for any industries. For instance, since India started to export some products then that products industries income drastically rose. That was explained by one survey of the University of Gujarat in 2018.
To conclude, although international cooperation is beneficial for the environment, that is more useful for world business than the environment. In my opinion, the international committees are helpful to improve businesses and it’s profit too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41911764706 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99371277454 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6720882159 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5789473684 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3157894737 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2344001094 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673992857544 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066533600374 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143837213117 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725205502649 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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