Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the people borrow money very easily and almost all Civilians have a credit card therefore people buy car from that credit. I explain both the side of this idea this is good or risky and give my opinion in following paragraphs.
To Start with, there are many reasons that support this statement is good. First and foremost people can buy that thing without sufficient case. They can gives money from monthly installment therefore, they do not require full money at the buying time. It’s hard to add new facility in the house without case. For example, last week one of my friend buys car with helps of credit now they give them money back from his salary.
Moreover there are values disadvantage for this idea. Firstly, there is one to weeks because people buy something on credit and damn income source is only job and if they’ve left their job they unable to pay the amount of that thing. Secondly people buy more than dick on for them it’s hard to pay back.
In my opinion, buy from the credit is a good idea but if we did not access properly it’s handful for us.
To conclude, all the statement have a two side positive and negative, this idea is a positive because it give us something without case and negative is have risk.
- Schools should stop using books for teaching children as they find them boring and use films TV and computers instand To what extent do you agree with this 61
- Pressure on the school and university student is increasing and student or push too hard work when they are young do you think it is positive or negative development 56
- Some employer think their plumber academic qualification are more important than life experience and personal skill when they look for an employer why is it the case Is it a positive or negative development 56
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not However it is sometimes called that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician 56
- nowadays people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy do you think it s advantageous out to win disadvantage 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...thing without sufficient case. They can gives money from monthly installment therefor...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...give them money back from his salary. Moreover there are values disadvantage for this ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...ive, this idea is a positive because it give us something without case and negative ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56444444444 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20309098236 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582222222222 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8851585512 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5833333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180253232086 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684140793948 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561843934953 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104845471778 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626895276413 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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