Some people say that the best way to improve safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving car or riding motorbikes what extent do you agree or disagree
In this present era, the ratio of an accident on the road is increased, which is harmful to people. Few people think that if the minimum legal age for driving increases, then road safety will be better. This essay will enshrine why people think about these phenomena, and also explain the reasons for my disagreement, which are described in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, plenty of reasons why people think in that way. To begin with, the most of the accident was happened because of immaturity and less decision-making ability, and the government increase the minimum age to 22, so the drivers become more mature and develop their decision-making ability. that will reduce the amount of accident and improve the safety on the road. For example, since the Indian government changed the minimum age, then the accident rate was reduced in India, which was described by the Times of India in 2018.
However, numbers of things that are more effective than the minimum age for road safety. Firstly, the main factor of accidents is the high population of vehicles. The number of vehicles is reduced by providing better public transport, which will enhance road safety. Secondly, the speed limit also helps to decline the rate of accident. For instance, The USA made a rule for speed, after that accident was reduced there.
To conclude, although the minimum age for driving is reasonable, public transport and the speed limit is more effective than age for road safety. In my opinion, I believe that there are a few other ways, which improve transport safety.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
... develop their decision-making ability. that will reduce the amount of accident and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55677341879 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505703422053 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8911026764 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184415650879 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691491653644 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665193476118 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122348655407 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305245826306 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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