Some people think that the government should provide unemployed people with a free mobile phone and free access to the internet to help them find jobs to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
The vast majority of people reckon that there is a duty for the government to make free mobile phones and free internet access available so that the unemployed part of the society can find appropriate jobs for themselves. This essay intends to discuss both sides of the view and the following paragraphs will debate whether it is agreeable point or it is of no use supplying the unemployed people with these nice conditions.
To be with, in today's modern world, the internet of social networking systems is full of advertisements that aim at providing the unemployed with satisfactory job opportunities. Of course, without the use of mobile phone and available internet it is impossible to achieve such kinds of jobs. In fact, surfing the net, one can encounter more vacations than searching a job in a workforce shop-a traditional way of finding a job. As a result, not only does the government benefit from this event, but also the unemployed the population. So, the newly accepted workers tend to work efficiently for the community income.
On the other hand, it is evident that there is so much uncensored data through the internet which the user might come across whether consciously or unconsciously. That is to say, it is impossible to control all over the net users. The user himself may not act as a one who is searching a job, but as a hiker or other types of criminals. In this case, this strategy maynot work as intended and may lead to the unexpected results. Moreover, being impossible for many undeveloped countries, it can be financially harmful to the well-developed countries. Since the expenses of internet access are high, some kinds of failures may appear in field of telecommunication.
Taking everything into consideration, the unemployed residences of the countries can get their needed jobs thanks to the unlimited internet usage. However, all sources of the net are not always proper the people, also the payment required for the internet can inflict a crisis for the state.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, moreover, so, well, in fact, of course, as a result, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96706586826 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9780307013 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562874251497 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2033439851 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265645983642 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737214938092 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760583591592 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160279919196 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105354750192 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, moreover, so, well, in fact, of course, as a result, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96706586826 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9780307013 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562874251497 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2033439851 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265645983642 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737214938092 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760583591592 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160279919196 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105354750192 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.