You organized for a relative a 90th birthday party in a hotel, many elderly guests attended this party which is of a great success. Write a letter to thank you the hotel manager. In your letter
Give the details of the party
The reason why the party was so successful
Mention a staff who helped you a lot
Dear sir,
I booked your hotel on 6th march. Actually, it was the 90th birthday of my grandmother so we planned a surprise party for her and it was only possible and successful because of the service of you and yours team members.
There was a gathering of 50 people in which my relatives and family members took part. As it my grandmother’s birthday party so most of them are her age mates. It was tense situation for us to look after each guy even some them are on wheelchair. Your team members made this possible due to their special efforts and hospitality skills considering guests to look after. They organized multiple games for them like card games and musical games which we all enjoyed to the fullest.
I would like to special thanks Mr. dubey as he managed the whole team and the party very smoothly and well organized. All of the guests are praising the music and the specially the catering system such as drinks and snacks. We already paid you but I will feel happy if you accept this check of 200$ which I have attached in this email as a token of my thanks.
Yours sincerely,
Manmohandeep.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...relatives and family members took part. As it my grandmother’s birthday party so m...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...arty very smoothly and well organized. All of the guests are praising the music and the s...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the specially the'. Did you mean 'specially the'?
Suggestion: specially the
...f the guests are praising the music and the specially the catering system such as drinks and snac...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
... feel happy if you accept this check of 200$ which I have attached in this email as ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a token of my thanks. Yours sincerely, Manmohandeep.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, well, even so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54726368159 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50394604542 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606965174129 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.625481561 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0909090909 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292357755725 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935054711644 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661024946455 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203239686367 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613133360752 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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