In this modern world internet play's a vital role in distribution of knowledge among the general pubic, a number of people believe that the information provided is inaccurate, however i disagree with this notion, this essay will discuss both views with some relevant examples.
Firstly internet is easily accessible to every age group further more if someone wants to travel it becomes far more convenient for them to look up the internet for the availability of rooms in a hotel, dinning places etc, for example, after the internet revolution, in my home town the flow or tourism gradually increased as more and more people have easy access to the resorts through internet, therefore i believe not all information provided is inaccurate.
Secondly as the content of the information provided on the internet cannot be verified this can be misused to serve someone's personal agenda, for example a mobile phone company named freedom 32 promised their costumer's a smart phone for merely 320 rupees, however their claims where misleading moreover a number of costumers lost their advance which they had paid to the company, as it was a scam, for these reason's data provided on the internet cannot be completely trusted worthy, subsequently the people should be more care-full on the internet.
In conclusion, although the content provided on the internet is not completely accurate, we cannot deny that there is an amount of legitimacy about the internet.
- The continued rise in the world s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time What are the causes of this continued rise Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity 67
- Research says more and more business training and business meeting taking place online Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 84
- The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone Do you agree or disagree 61
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level However some say individuals should pay for their university education Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'reasons'' or 'reason's'?
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...he company, as it was a scam, for these reasons data provided on the internet cannot be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13502109705 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72288913274 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616033755274 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.794268667 49.4020404114 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 304.25 106.682146367 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.25 20.7667163134 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.25 7.06120827912 386% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0599468145767 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391699834446 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290366572121 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0391699834446 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290366572121 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 13.0946893788 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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