Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these both two views and give your opinion.
Recently, migration became more and more eminent due to some reasons ranging from terrorism in motherland to expensive daily life. When raising number of migrants decided to expatriate from their homeland to another country, they wonder whether to accept local culture or to hold dear their national cultural heritage by founding their own minority community or even autonomy.
In most cases migrants in the beginning of new life in different country experience some issues with merging into another society, its culture and traditions. It would be optimal solution if group of migrants starts adapting to a new society by learning official language of a country they have migrated in order to not being discriminated or treated less than local citizens. Additionally, they should adjust to dissimilar conditions and work together with locals to gain a great deal of life experience.
Nevertheless, founding a minority community could be optimum solution to preserve their own endemic customs. By living with selfsame citizenry, they can adapt to unlike commonwealth gradually which will not lead to missing motherland. Following this further, creating a minority can attract indigenous people and other migrated nationalities to their motherland, however we must keep in mind that it is extremely responsible duty because locals will judge any country as a whole by representative migrants living in their own country.
To summarize, I believe that it is outstanding for immigrants to adapt to new environment and preserve their own national wealths. Thus, it is definitely better to create own minority to satisfy both indigenous and immigrants.
Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'thus', 'in most cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217391304348 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.130434782609 0.0946595960268 138% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0471014492754 0.0501214627716 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0652173913043 0.0437548338989 149% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11231884058 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0579710144928 0.0403226058552 144% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94784736327 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0688405797101 0.0326793684256 211% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0507246376812 0.0861772015684 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0289855072464 0.021408717616 135% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00724637681159 0.011925033212 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1654.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.4609375 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.44140625 0.374742101984 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.37890625 0.28420135186 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.28125 0.203846283523 138% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1484375 0.137316102897 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94784736327 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62890625 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 69.0372826177 60.7387585426 114% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 25.6 20.7743622355 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6540650705 49.517814964 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.4 127.492653851 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7743622355 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 63.490625 49.1944974215 129% => OK
Elegance: 1.38961038961 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342719724312 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125434614822 0.102741220458 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.076285674546 0.0668466124924 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.643830005224 0.534860350844 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142003403797 0.148594505496 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155451369145 0.134430193775 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580630178784 0.0742795772207 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278122334016 0.324371583561 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0386504281983 0.0638462369009 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227424330474 0.228012699653 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470293227323 0.058150111329 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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