Internet is a very convenient source of information for almost every individual across the globe,however some believe that a large part of information provided by the internet is not reliable, in my opinion most of the information provided by the internet is legit.
Since internet is commodious, people use it as the primary source of information as it is almost a freebie, therefore accessed by people of different age groups and financial status, for instance if a student wants to choose a school or college to continue or begin education, they can compare various institutions without moving out of their homes and choose a suitable institution, provided that the source is popular and verified, supporting this instance, a literate can get employed choosing the company and applying without leaving their comfort zone,although there are a negligible amount of drawbacks when the information is provided by a source which accepts every content irrespective of the legitimacy of the source which can result in misleading people on a large scale.
further more, internet has become an important part of our life as we spend a major part of our free time surfing the web, for example internet is an immediate source of current affairs for the citizens of any country across the globe and the readers can choose the specific affair which they are interested to know about at any time of the day, the sources of the news are also not limited when it comes to choosing the right source for the information we require
To conclude, every good this has a boon and bane, I personally believe that a small part of information we is incorrect, in contrast this problem can be solved by spending some time in verifying the source or depending upon a verified and popular source of information for ideal flow of legit information
- Some people believe that any one can create art such as painting poetry music and so on Others thinks that a person should have special abilities to create art Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community Discuss these both two views and give your opinion 56
- Some people think that to be successful you need to get in university education whereas others say it is not true Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion 85
- Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level However some say individuals should pay for their university education Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
...almost every individual across the globe,however some believe that a large part of infor...
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Line 2, column 557, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , although
...lying without leaving their comfort zone,although there are a negligible amount of drawba...
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Line 2, column 590, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...rt zone,although there are a negligible amount of drawbacks when the information is pr...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Further
...in misleading people on a large scale. further more, internet has become an important ...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ht source for the information we require To conclude, every good this has a boon ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concluding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: Concluding
...source for the information we require To conclude, every good this has a boon and bane, I...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...eve that a small part of information we is incorrect, in contrast this problem can...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion for ideal flow of legit information
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95114006515 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8383580569 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508143322476 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 102.0 20.2975951904 503% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 241.165226902 49.4020404114 488% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 506.666666667 106.682146367 475% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.333333333 20.7667163134 493% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 7.06120827912 411% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266544709703 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202758784451 0.084324248473 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714794825303 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183300367073 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065084470446 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 53.0 13.0946893788 405% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -32.05 50.2224549098 -64% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.1 11.3001002004 381% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.14 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.8 10.1190380762 423% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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