A person spends most of his or her time at the workplace, and life becomes meaningless when there is no job satisfaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A question has been raised whether workaholics have become a trend in modern life, where people live in their office more than anywhere else. Some people argued that the fulfillment of a job plays a crucial part in their life. From a personal perspective, I do believe that aside from the satisfaction, the meaning of life can be defined by many other different aspects.
The aspect to consider regarding the definition of a dream occupation concerns the work-environment. It can be observed that job satisfaction is defined as a place where laborers are motivated and encouraged by their employers or colleagues apart from an inspirational working-place. Once people can fulfill their fundamental demand, all efforts will be put into upswing the quality of work. On that basis, the more attention is drawn on people's duty, the more achievements they can receive, which will reflect positively on their ordinary life. If they find no interest in work or get any trouble, that negative feeling can damage their behavior towards people around them, which can be harmful to their daily relationship.
On the other hand, many people are convinced that life includes not only the success in career but also other aspects such as relationships. Nowadays, more people tend to be workhouses, where all of their resources, such as time, money, or health, are seized by responsibility in work and they leave families and friends behind. For instance, a father, who prefers working until 12 pm to attending his son's play, might neglect his son's memorial moments in life. In this regard, in spite of how successful he is, he will feel lonely and empty inside, whenever he looks back. That is the case for other people, who wish they had more time to build their relationships instead of sitting around four walls at the office.
In conclusion, it is notable that job achievements can satisfy some aspects in people’s life. The coexistence of other factors, such as relationships, however, should be shared the similarity concentration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, regarding, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09880239521 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92619757033 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604790419162 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1766294237 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.533333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101503525643 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372371509194 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295071358222 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686029645627 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294742371598 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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